When I walked in, I didn't see anything. There wasn't any furniture at all, and the mahogany floor was slightly faded. The house was really big on the inside with tall ceilings and lots of space, much bigger than it appeared on the inside. The strange thing was that even though it looked like nobody was living there or had been inside for a long time, it wasn't dusty or dirty. I started walking up the long, twisted staircase to the second floor. I turned the corner and I thought I heard a noise, like someone would make if they were startled. I tried to ignore it, thinking it was just all inside my head. I was peeking into corners, glancing at the full bathroom, master bedroom, and other such rooms. I got to another door, which I started to open.
All of a sudden, something popped out. At first, I couldn't distinguish what I was but then I knew. It was a pair or eyes, a blazing purple shade. It looked like a woman's eyes by the neatly trimmed eyebrows and curled eyelashes. It shocked me and I started backing up. The eyes were glaring at me, as if to say "What are you doing here? This is not yours, go away!" Soon another pair of eyes followed, a rusty orange. They looked like a man's eyes. I started backing up even more quickly now, getting really scared. As if the orange and purple eyes didn't scare me enough, a new pair of the floating eyes appeared. These were a fiery red, and extremely angry. I couldn't tell if they were a man or woman's, but now that was the least of my problems. I turned around and started running, scared for my life. I didn't care if they were going to hurt me, but that place just creeped me out! The eyes started following me, like they were running after me. I ran for about five minutes, until I came out of the alley. That didn't stop me from running though, and I didn't take time to look back if they eyes were following me. I ran and ran all the way to my house, and I didn't stop until I got to my room. When I got to the door of my room and opened it, I saw three pairs of eyes, a red pair, a purple pair, and an orange pair, all staring at me.
Thursday, September 18, 2008
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2 comments:
i love this story. keep writing :)
CONTINTUE CONTINUE CONTINUE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!
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